दिल से.........
लगता आज सब अधुरा सा है,
क्यूँ अपनों का प्यार न पुरा सा है।
कहते थे की वोह मेरे अपने है,
फ़िर क्यूँ तोडे मेरे आज सपने है?
करता है दिल सवाल उनसे,
क्यूँ मारा मुझे अपने चल से?
क्यूँ करे वादे,
जब अच न थे इरादे?
बहुत है दिल में दर्द आज,
पर किस्से बताऊँ और किस्से चुपयुं?
कहते है वोह मेरे दीवाने है,
पर फ़िर क्यूँ आज वही इस एहसास से अनजाने है?
दिल चाहता है के कह दू उन्हें मेरे दर्द के क्या अफसाने है,
पर क्या वोह समझ पाएंगे की यह सब उनके प्यार के नजराने है?
I have no words to tell how i feel after reading this!
ReplyDeleteBut haan jis ke liye bhi likha, kash woh samjh jaayen!
And sometimes u have to explain how u feel, people just might not understand ur eyes or voice always!
God Bless!
Take care!
beutiful..
ReplyDeletei learned one thing in lif..express urself before things go out of ur hand..
wonderfully xpressed!!
regards,
monk
@Sumeet:i hope d same sumeet... thanks anyways.....
ReplyDelete@monk: life teaches tht to everybdy......thanks...:)
jitna dard hoga utna hi pyaar badhega...........
ReplyDeletethats y "the pain is endless"...........
cos love never ends......
i knw.... it never ends but dnt knw maybe it changes.....
ReplyDeletethe post was a good read indeed.......felt the pain of loosing a loved one after a long long time through your poem...nice one....keep up writing
ReplyDeleteNow coming to another point yeah Vandana I do agree with you love never ends but it changes with people. Its probably because we love different people for different facets of their character, habits or nature. The mistake sometimes we do is start comparing our present with our past and hence tend to loose some wonderful moments with our present loved ones.....
Whoops I see myself putting some heavy words across rightaway in the first comment.....
Any ways nice post dudette.......keep it up :-)
BTW I found you through the blog of Nidhi, good interesting posts and creativity in any format interests me hence thought of scribbling some of my thoughts in reply....
Keep up the good writing :)
Let me tell u one thing...
ReplyDeletei don't know abt nethng as yet but..
Please don't leave the hand...hope u got it..
B'cause love is the name of Hold on...
just tell tht guy..
n dnt be shy..
but if the guy is stupid sorry to say thn i hv another option.. to know let me know..
Vaise Hmmmmm very nice wrk.. but need smthng
@zorroan: well i knw tht u say me in nidhi's profile!!!!
ReplyDeletei completely agree with u tht unknowlingly we start comparing all our relations, but tht is human. Also thanks a ton. hope u ll see more interesting stuf!!!
and its gr8 to hv such heavy words for my writing....
@dheeraj: i knw love is to hold on to and doesnt go away wit small things.... i m with my love & ll always be!!!! i hope i dnt need any other option...lolzzz
thanks anyways :)