Its over, it’s come to an end…….
All that I went through has made me bend……
The burden of broken trust that I have in me
Is what I got in the end……
I question myself again & again,
Over & over as what did I do??
What did I do to be where I stand……?
I trusted him, his love, his friendship & everything we shared……
But what I got in the end……
He said he loved me more than his life,
Then why is that he lied to his own life……
His feelings I felt were so pure…..
Ohhh!!!! I was just so sure…!!!
Then why he killed me today
By snatching my best friend away…..
He said I was his angel….
Who bought light to his life………
Then why he cut my wings with all those lies……
Is this what friendship is??
Is this what love is??
If yes is the answer, then I trust none……
Because this is what I got in the end……..
Now what do I do with this dead soul,
Which resides in me so alone…
As this is what I got in the END…………
Ms. Poetess... sai hai ... saali tere se pehle bhi poocha tha.. who's this person u r writting for..?? mereko pata hai waise.. bus makin it sure.. hehe.. nice poem waise.. keep it up
ReplyDeleteits for NOBODY..........just felt like writing & wrote it.....samjhi aunty.....
ReplyDeleteyou gave him the right to betray you, and so he did.. m not trying to discourage u, dnt get me wrong. but its we who are at fault that we keep a blind faith on those who dnt evn care.
ReplyDeleteand for ur questions.. i wud say yes this is frndship, yes this is love... with all the highs and lows, ups and downs, trust and mistrust, joys and sorrows. deal with it, thats life.
happy with my comment?? ;)
once again... u knw who :P
ye philosopher to aur koi ho hi nai sakta.... if this is friendship.. if this is love... to nahi chahiye hume.... wht say vandy aunty....
ReplyDeleteactuaaly....dnt want if thts wat it is....
ReplyDeletetum sab logo ka dimaag kharaab ho gaya hai
ReplyDeleteactually vishu.... ho gaya hai.....
ReplyDeletemay be someone understand what you've tried to express in this poem....
ReplyDeletei wish the same..... someday......maybe....
ReplyDeletewhat if he understood the depth of his mistake that you are trying to potrey in this poem even before mey be even before you wrote this poem??he knwzz his mistake and the magnitude off his blunder nw what??he knwz he cant undo his biggest blunder nw what?? mey be the only thing he can do gud for you is stay away from you so that he cant hurt you any more than what he has done uptill now trust loyalty are big words in a relationship when they dissapear for me soo does the relationship and what is even harder is to gain them back but its not impossible to do it!!!!!!bec nothing is mpossible
ReplyDeletewell i dnt knw who u r but seriously want to knw hw can u say all this??? without knowing for whom is the poem and wat he is feeling....
ReplyDeleteplease tell me about ur identity first them i ll answer u....
its obvious veenu who this is..... i cud guess.... cud nt u??????
ReplyDeleteand heyy...... a very nice poem by the way..... i knw who u r talking abt, and i know what u got in the end, i knw.... coz i was thr too..... wid u, but still very far away!!
ReplyDeletein reply to the post tht i recieved by not published on my blog.... its ok dear,... i thought it was sum1 else, so thts why askd....
ReplyDeleteand ya i hv alot of Qs and i m myself looking for the answers..... u can definately visit my blog & gv ur comments....
and gagan whom do u think it is????
ReplyDeleteand whom do u think i m talkin abt??
no taking names baby....... but i knw and u knw, coz just like the poem I wrote for US, this one YOU wrote, for US!! if u dont agree then its ur opinion, but alot of wat u feel, isa wat i feel..... as always....
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