I was always by him, and stood like his strength, but 1day it came when i could not stand.
I loved him the way he is he was,
with a little hope that he'll understand.
Didn't knew that hope'll let me down 1day,
when I would look to him & he would say go away!!!
He said I never understood him, his pain
but only the heart knows what i felt that day when it rained.
There was flood of tears inside me & killing emotions inside him.
But still he kept them,
those emotions of pain & misery,
hoping that sum1 will understand them.
He kept on searching for that 1human,
who was standing with open hands.
But then why is the question, that he couldn't see me??
Standing there for you to run & hold my hand.
In me was only wish,
to hug you close and take the pain as much.
He said he loved me,
but then why he questioned mine??
He asked why I feel the pain,
but how did he forget that all his pain was mine??
The answer was there in question,
the way me in him.......
Now I just hope that 1day he'll feel that again,
what made us bond together with a hope forever.......
very well written. Hope the 'he' in this poem understands u soon :)
ReplyDeleteits not the end, not evn the beginning of an end... its probably the end of a new beginning of the relationship ;)
u knw who :P
end of a new beginning of the relationship ?????????? yaaar who ever this anonymus is...katham hee kardiya relationship koo..in the last line ..kamal hai yaar vaha the person is luking for hope nd you r killing that yaar ...aisa kaise matlab naaaaaaaaa...noooooo aisa nahi kateyaatr....
ReplyDeletewell.... this is for Mr. anonymous... the comment above meant that its the new beginning of the existing relationship wit a positive approach not ending the relationship....... wat u understood was a pessimist's perception..
ReplyDeleteguys nd gurlss out on these blogs nd tu that mr anonymous dnt fight with this girl nd all koi fayada nahi hai u cant wiin with her on arguments soo fr the mr anonymous let be chill nd madam vandana nice poem..by the way...lots of love it has for the 1 you love nice nice
ReplyDeletewery well written..
ReplyDeleteits drippin in TAT 'dard'..
there was no dard...... i was sitting alone & had a rage emotions tht came into this poem....
ReplyDeletehmmm ... nice 1.. ek baat bata.. likhi kide liye hai?? sahnu vi taa pata lage... but its quite gud...
ReplyDeleteWell specially for Rrrohit.... this is not NAKLI post....I have written it MYSELF. It is NOT copied from google or anywhr...... Get this in ur mind sir....
ReplyDeleteI loved your poem so much I think your poem is so true. ..it reached my soul it was so beautiful I enjoyed it because it just reminds me of my very best friend. and how she is there for me always ...this poem is precious and it has an awesome meaning ...so i just wanna thank you for putting this on here :)
ReplyDeletethanks dear.... now thats better..... :P
ReplyDeletegud hai
ReplyDeletethanks rahul.....
ReplyDeletewhy can't one who says "i love u" understand our feelings...?? This is one question that has no answer... if someone find the answer let us know...
ReplyDeletesaying the 3magical words 'I LOVE U' is very easy, but making the other feel them and understand the importance of these words is very difficult.....
ReplyDelete'LOVE' is very special and it takes a second to lose it, but life to get the 1 u love the most.....
cannot agree any more with you!!!!!LOVE easy to say difficult to make them feel it
ReplyDeletei dnt expect anybdy to agree with me even.....
ReplyDeletebut as per wat i understand......love is eay to say but difficult to understand it and make the other person realize.....